Core


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Core – by RetardoTheMagnificent

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

I really like the way this story is told and how well it hooks you into the story.  Part of me wants to know what the creature would look like but the other part is glad that I don’t.

A Dead God


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A Dead God – by Panda Claws

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

I wish we could have heard more about the Necrotic Church here, but I liked the story overall.  That being said, I felt a little rushed when I was reading the ending part.  I felt like there wasn’t enough time to really build up a dread about the impending doom headed towards earth.

The life in the machine


The life in the machine

2,566 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 10 5
Originality/Creativity: 10 5
Creepiness: 7 3

Total:

9/10 – Wonderful

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A programmer creates a game that makes him contemplate his own existence.

The Poet


The Poet

857 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 8 4
Originality/Creativity: 10 5
Creepiness: 8 4

Total:

9/10 – Wonderful

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A man finds a poetry group but something strange happens at one of their meetings.

Revolving


Revolving

4,216 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 9 4
Originality/Creativity: 10 5
Creepiness: 8 4

Total:

9/10 – Wonderful

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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The author wakes up in a strange and horrible world.