A Dead God


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A Dead God – by Panda Claws

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My Ratings and additional details below:

 


Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

I wish we could have heard more about the Necrotic Church here, but I liked the story overall.  That being said, I felt a little rushed when I was reading the ending part.  I felt like there wasn’t enough time to really build up a dread about the impending doom headed towards earth.

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A Hands-On Approach


A Hands-On Approach

2,526 Words

 
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My Rating:
Grammar/Structure: 8 4
Originality/Creativity: 9 5
Creepiness: 9 5
Total 9/10 – Wonderful 5/5 – Excellent

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A man begins to see something strange.

Emails from Scotland


Emails from Scotland

2,493 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 4
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 5
Total: 5/5 – Excellent

My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 9
Originality/Creativity: 9
Creepiness: 10
Total: 9/10 – Fantastic

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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The author’s friend spends some time in Scotland.

BEN Drowned


BEN Drowned

11,407 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 5
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 5
Total: 5/5 – Excellent

My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 10
Originality/Creativity: 10
Creepiness: 10
Total: 10/10 – Excellent

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A boy goes searching for some old games and finds something unexpected.