Anonymous Letter


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Anonymous Letter  – by LethalPen

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

It’s dark, strange and creepy and I love it.  The breakdown of our trust in the narrator is one of my favorite things and it’s done well here.

The Criars


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The Criars – by LethalPen

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

That ending.  There were so many great things about this story.  I felt completely immersed very early on. I wish we could have known a little more about the cult, but it didn’t really matter to the story.  You get to know as much as you need to know.

Revolving


Revolving

4,216 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 9 4
Originality/Creativity: 10 5
Creepiness: 8 4

Total:

9/10 – Wonderful

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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The author wakes up in a strange and horrible world.

LMESKD


LMESKD

6,810 Words

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My Ratings:

GrammarStructure: 10 5
Originality/Creativity: 10 5
Creepiness: 9 5
Total 10/10 – Excellent 5/5 – Excellent

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A store clerk is given a strange package.