THE ALL-NEW IMPROVED UNIVERSAL BEVERAGE AND SNACK MACHINE


THE ALL-NEW IMPROVED UNIVERSAL BEVERAGE AND SNACK MACHINE

1,109 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 7 4
Originality/Creativity: 9 4
Creepiness: 8 3

Total:

8/10 – Great

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A man comes upon a strange snack machine.

The Minister’s Black Veil


The Minister’s Black Veil

5,327 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 10 5
Originality/Creativity: 10 5
Creepiness: 8 4

Total:

9/10 – Wonderful

5/5 – Excellent


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A minister starts behaving strangely.

Spasm


Spasm

1,528 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 4
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 4
Total: 4/5 – Great

My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 9
Originality/Creativity: 9
Creepiness: 8
Total: 9/10 – Fantastic

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A man struggles to find the source of a troubling pain.

One-Man Hide and Seek


One-Man Hide and Seek

850 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 4
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 5
Total: 5/5 – Excellent

My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 9
Originality/Creativity: 10
Creepiness: 10
Total: 10/10 – Excellent

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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Instructions on a somewhat darker version of hide-and-seek.