Anonymous Letter


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Anonymous Letter  – by LethalPen

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My Ratings and additional details below:

 


Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

It’s dark, strange and creepy and I love it.  The breakdown of our trust in the narrator is one of my favorite things and it’s done well here.

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A Hands-On Approach


A Hands-On Approach

2,526 Words

 
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My Rating:
Grammar/Structure: 8 4
Originality/Creativity: 9 5
Creepiness: 9 5
Total 9/10 – Wonderful 5/5 – Excellent

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A man begins to see something strange.

Don’t Swim on Sundays


Don’t Swim on Sundays

635 words

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My Rating:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 3
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 4
Total: 4

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A loving grandmother gives a stern warning to her 2 grandsons.