Spasm


Spasm

1,528 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 4
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 4
Total: 4/5 – Great

My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 9
Originality/Creativity: 9
Creepiness: 8
Total: 9/10 – Fantastic

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A man struggles to find the source of a troubling pain.

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The Clown, the Paint, and the Turbines


The Clown, the Paint, and the Turbines

2,222 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 3/5
Originality/Creativity: 4/5
Creepiness: 3/5
Total: 3/5 – Average

My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 5/10
Originality/Creativity: 8/10
Creepiness: 6/10
Total: 6/10 – Nice

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A boy learns that he should have listened to his parents.