13 Curves – by BillSpringerJr
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Category Archives: 7 out of 10
A Christmas Warning
3,291 words
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| Grammar/Structure/Spelling: | 3/5 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 3/5 |
| Creepiness: | 3/5 |
| Total: | 3/5 – Average |
| Grammar/Structure/Spelling: | 7/10 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 7/10 |
| Creepiness: | 6/10 |
| Total: | 7/10 – Good |
Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
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On Christmas Eve, A brother and sister decide to stay up and wait for Santa.
The Clown, the Paint, and the Turbines
The Clown, the Paint, and the Turbines
2,222 words
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| Grammar/Structure/Spelling: | 3/5 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 4/5 |
| Creepiness: | 3/5 |
| Total: | 3/5 – Average |
| Grammar/Structure/Spelling: | 5/10 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8/10 |
| Creepiness: | 6/10 |
| Total: | 6/10 – Nice |
Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
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A boy learns that he should have listened to his parents.
Scary Noodles 