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Anonymous Letter – by LethalPen
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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
It’s dark, strange and creepy and I love it. The breakdown of our trust in the narrator is one of my favorite things and it’s done well here.
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The Criars – by LethalPen
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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
That ending. There were so many great things about this story. I felt completely immersed very early on. I wish we could have known a little more about the cult, but it didn’t really matter to the story. You get to know as much as you need to know.
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City of Dreams – by Lathyndis
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The Beast in the Forest – by Whitemagus2000
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313 West Main Street – by NimhShambler
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I hate it when my brother Charlie has to go away. – by horrorinpureform
| 240 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 4 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A child misses his brother.
My friend and I found a video camera. We shouldn’t have watched what was on it
| 1,317 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 7 | 3 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 9 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 4 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
Two kids find a seemingly abandoned video camera and regret watching it.
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My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 7 | 3 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 9 | 5 |
| Creepiness: | 7 | 3 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
An average woman leads an average life right up untill the end.
Scary Noodles 