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Anonymous Letter – by LethalPen
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My Ratings and additional details below:
Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
It’s dark, strange and creepy and I love it. The breakdown of our trust in the narrator is one of my favorite things and it’s done well here.
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The Criars – by LethalPen
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My Ratings and additional details below:
Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
That ending. There were so many great things about this story. I felt completely immersed very early on. I wish we could have known a little more about the cult, but it didn’t really matter to the story. You get to know as much as you need to know.
I hate it when my brother Charlie has to go away. – by horrorinpureform
| 240 Words |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 4 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A child misses his brother.
| 4,895 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 7 | 3 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A child decides to play in the cemetery at night and discovers a secret meeting being held there
| 197 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 7 | 3 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 9 | 4 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
An obsession with perfection.
THE ALL-NEW IMPROVED UNIVERSAL BEVERAGE AND SNACK MACHINE
| 1,109 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 7 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 9 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 3 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A man comes upon a strange snack machine.
| 2,674 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 4 |
Total: |
8/10 – Wonderful |
4/5 – Great |
| 1,840 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 3 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 4 |
Total: |
8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A woman finds herself in an unfortunate situation.
| 2,526 Words |
| My Rating: | ||
| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 9 | 5 |
| Creepiness: | 9 | 5 |
| Total | 9/10 – Wonderful | 5/5 – Excellent |
A man begins to see something strange.
| 1,827 Words |
| My Ratings: | Out of 5 |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 4 |
| Total | 4 |
| My Rating: | Out of 10 |
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| GrammarStructure: | 8 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 |
| Creepiness: | 8 |
| Total | 8 |
A man finds horror on a used laptop.
Scary Noodles 