Anonymous Letter


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Anonymous Letter  – by LethalPen

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

It’s dark, strange and creepy and I love it.  The breakdown of our trust in the narrator is one of my favorite things and it’s done well here.

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The Criars


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The Criars – by LethalPen

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My Ratings and additional details below:

 


Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

That ending.  There were so many great things about this story.  I felt completely immersed very early on. I wish we could have known a little more about the cult, but it didn’t really matter to the story.  You get to know as much as you need to know.

I hate it when my brother Charlie has to go away.


I hate it when my brother Charlie has to go away. – by horrorinpureform

240 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 8 4
Originality/Creativity: 8 4
Creepiness: 8 4

Total:

8/10 – Great

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A child misses his brother.

The Blood Keeper


The Blood Keeper

4,895 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 8 4
Originality/Creativity: 8 4
Creepiness: 7 3

Total:

8/10 – Great

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A child decides to play in the cemetery at night and discovers a secret meeting being held there

THE ALL-NEW IMPROVED UNIVERSAL BEVERAGE AND SNACK MACHINE


THE ALL-NEW IMPROVED UNIVERSAL BEVERAGE AND SNACK MACHINE

1,109 Words

 
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My Rating:

Grammar/Structure: 7 4
Originality/Creativity: 9 4
Creepiness: 8 3

Total:

8/10 – Great

4/5 – Great


Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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A man comes upon a strange snack machine.