Tag Archives: Beings

Core

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Core – by RetardoTheMagnificent

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

I really like the way this story is told and how well it hooks you into the story.  Part of me wants to know what the creature would look like but the other part is glad that I don’t.

The Criars

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The Criars – by LethalPen

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Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

That ending.  There were so many great things about this story.  I felt completely immersed very early on. I wish we could have known a little more about the cult, but it didn’t really matter to the story.  You get to know as much as you need to know.

We Know You Are Out There

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We Know You Are Out There – by Paninis_Cupcake

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Emails from Scotland

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Emails from Scotland

2,493 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 4
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 5
Total: 5/5 – Excellent
My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 9
Originality/Creativity: 9
Creepiness: 10
Total: 9/10 – Fantastic

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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The author’s friend spends some time in Scotland.

One-Man Hide and Seek

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One-Man Hide and Seek

850 words

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My Rating out of 5:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 4
Originality/Creativity: 5
Creepiness: 5
Total: 5/5 – Excellent
My Rating out of 10:
Grammar/Structure/Spelling: 9
Originality/Creativity: 10
Creepiness: 10
Total: 10/10 – Excellent

Short Summary – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*

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Instructions on a somewhat darker version of hide-and-seek.