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A Dead God – by Panda Claws
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My Ratings and additional details below:
Final Thoughts: – *WARNING: Possible Spoilers!*
I wish we could have heard more about the Necrotic Church here, but I liked the story overall. That being said, I felt a little rushed when I was reading the ending part. I felt like there wasn’t enough time to really build up a dread about the impending doom headed towards earth.
Survival Dosage – by Harrison Trawnik
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We Know You Are Out There – by Paninis_Cupcake
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My Ratings and additional details below:
| 2,566 Words |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 10 | 5 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 10 | 5 |
| Creepiness: | 7 | 3 |
Total: |
9/10 – Wonderful |
4/5 – Great |
A programmer creates a game that makes him contemplate his own existence.
| 952 Words |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 7 | 3 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 9 | 5 |
| Creepiness: | 7 | 3 |
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8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
An average woman leads an average life right up untill the end.
| 1,659 Words |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 3 |
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8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A town gets a new bottling facility.
The Long Sleep of Harold Brown
| 584 Words |
My Rating: |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 10 | 5 |
| Creepiness: | 8 | 4 |
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9/10 – Wonderful |
4/5 – Great |
A man tests out his own invention.
| 1,066 Words |
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| Grammar/Structure: | 8 | 4 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 8 | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 7 | 3 |
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8/10 – Great |
4/5 – Great |
A group of children are experimented on.
2,727 words
| Grammar/Structure/Spelling: | 5 |
| Originality/Creativity: | 5 |
| Creepiness: | 2 |
| Total: | 4 |
A quantum physics student takes a break from his work to go visit a carnival.
1,688 words
| Grammar/Structure/Spelling: | 4 |
| OriginalityCreativity: | 4 |
| Creepiness: | 3 |
| Total: | 4 |
Scary Noodles 